这几天在家里写歌。写了好几首歌。所以,

今天我就听了Apu的话。把这一首新demo

upload在这里和你们分享。



如果你们觉得好或者是不好都可以把comments

写下来。然后我再把不好的地方改掉。



这一首歌是叫‘我们’



灵感是从一天早上我起床的时候。看到guitar

在某一个角落。就突然间的想要写个。还是

把chorus先写的。我觉得这一首歌有一点

K歌的感觉。你们听一听看。有没有琅琅上口

的感觉?



谢谢你们收听林金五的新demo。你们是他的

第一个听众人物。嘻嘻

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  • ycleong
  • hi eric,<br />
    <br />
    having just listen to your demo "Wo Men" just now,<br />
    there&#039;s a lot of influence from "Happy Prince" and <br />
    &#039;Ai Qing Chu Xue Zhe"<br />
    <br />
    certain part you stressed too hard, try to soften it. (your voice)<br />
    i&#039;ve recorded the demo, and i&#039;ll listen to it again, <br />
    and i&#039;ll come back to you. or email you.<br />
    otherwise, you can come to my office and we&#039;ll listen<br />
    to your demo again, and i&#039;ll pinpoint the areas to improve.<br />
    <br />
    34 jalan jejaka 9, taman maluri,<br />
    cheras, 55100 kuala lumpur, west malaysia.<br />
    tel: 0193257745<br />
    <br />
    remember, i told you to write a song about "Superman"<br />
    and you didn&#039;t take to heart.<br />
    Now "Gary Cao" has wrote one, and it&#039;s on the way.<br />
    (read today&#039;s chinese paper on entertainment)<br />
    <br />
    anyhow, no worrylah, be happy and cheerful.<br />
    maybe we can produce something more extraordinary.<br />
    <br />
    =D
  • stopding
  • 虽然我不会音乐,我想分享我的感觉。<br />
    <br />
    第一次听的时候,真的好听,很舒服。<br />
    可是听多几次后,感觉上你唱得很辛苦,有点勉强的感觉。<br />
    <br />
    可能放轻松的唱,不用那么多的技巧,可能效果会比较好。<br />
    <br />
    我只是觉得啦!可能问专业人士会比较正确。。。<br />
    <br />
    不过这首歌很好听,我很喜欢,我想大家都会喜欢的。<br />
    <br />
    加油咯!
  • jiewengurl03
  • 蛮好听的,听了有很舒服的感觉...<br />
    但你唱起来好像很辛苦很吃力的样子...<br />
    但很容易琅琅上口...不错不错!!!<br />
    加油!!!<br />
  • irisayuki
  • wo jue de you dian qi guai...<br />
    gan jue shang yi ting jiu jue de shi ben di ge shou de chuang zuo.<br />
    yin wei ni de ju zi hen jian dian....<br />
    ru guo ni de yong ci neng rang ren gan jue you dian te bie he<br />
    you yi zhong hen nan jie shi de xin qing na jiu gen hao...<br />
    wo ye bu dong gai zen me shuo....yin wei mei kan guo ni de ge ci..<br />
    xi wang ni ming bai wo de yi shi...<br />
    bu yao wu hui ooh..hen bao qian zhe yang gen ni shuo...
  • ericlim
  • 谢谢你们的comments。嘻嘻。 其实,唱这一首歌的时<br />
    候我是刚起床的。所以有辛苦的感觉。多多抱歉。<br />
    <br />
    Regarding the Superman song. I&#039;ve tried writing it. <br />
    It&#039;s just that I don&#039;t think I have found a perfect <br />
    melody for it. So it doesn&#039;t mean someone else&#039;s <br />
    announced of composing that song first meant <br />
    anything :) We&#039;re all trying to make good music for <br />
    everyone. Hehe. Plus, there&#039;s also a song entitled <br />
    Superman by Five For Fighting sometime ago :) I&#039;ll <br />
    work harder on writing one in time to come :) Hope <br />
    you understand ya :) <br />
    <br />
    我在改一些不好的地方。谢谢!Improvements come <br />
    when there are comments! <br />
    <br />
  • yuehyean0102
  • 觉得demo永远都是最真,最好听和真情流露的。赞!赞!赞!eric!
  • singyee
  • 我比较喜欢听抒情歌,所以还蛮感动的!!<br />
    CHORUS PART比较能朗朗上口...<br />
    给你鼓励..给你掌声..<br />
    继续加油!!!<br />
  • itung
  • PC的喇叭坏了...<br />
    听不到啊...<br />
    等我多几天啊...<br />
    我要去买了...<br />
    不要酱快换掉啊....<br />
    我要听.....<br />
    <br />
    <br />
  • sooyin
  • hmmm.. i&#039;ve just seen something just now..<br />
    so.. not really into the mood..<br />
    will leave you a comment about the song sometime later..<br />
    plus.. i can&#039;t listen to it that clearly with my fren&#039;s comp..<br />
    hehe..<br />
    not that suitable for comments.. so wait la..<br />
    hehe..
  • karling82
  • 前面部分没有有吉它声音感觉真的很好,<br />
    不过假音,会不会太过火了呢??<br />
    嘻嘻!!过火是,太多段都是用假音,<br />
    嗯,就是最后那边的,唱得太激动那边,<br />
    哈,我不会音乐,也不敢说太多,等下怕给别人说知少少扮代表!<br />
    其实真的很开心在这里网络看到你的blog也能听到你的demo,<br />
    谢谢你!<br />
    加油!!
  • stephlau
  • eric . i cant hear any song nehx ,<br />
    you ady take it out izit ?<br />
    <br />
    well .. hmm ~<br />
    as long as you do your best ,,<br />
    compose a song with all your heart .<br />
    and that&#039;s a good song . ^^v<br />
    <br />
    <br />
    =))<br />
    shan
  • lOvElYo
  • 嗯,还好,加油努力吧。嘻嘻ING
  • CindyL89
  • hmm...dunno y i cant hear tat song leh...can u tell me how to hear it?