林健輝

hi eric,

having just listen to your demo "Wo Men" just now,
there's a lot of influence from "Happy Prince" and
'Ai Qing Chu Xue Zhe"

certain part you stressed too hard, try to soften it. (your voice)
i've recorded the demo, and i'll listen to it again,
and i'll come back to you. or email you.
otherwise, you can come to my office and we'll listen
to your demo again, and i'll pinpoint the areas to improve.

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remember, i told you to write a song about "Superman"
and you didn't take to heart.
Now "Gary Cao" has wrote one, and it's on the way.
(read today's chinese paper on entertainment)

anyhow, no worrylah, be happy and cheerful.
maybe we can produce something more extraordinary.

=D

虽然我不会音乐，我想分享我的感觉。

第一次听的时候，真的好听，很舒服。
可是听多几次后，感觉上你唱得很辛苦，有点勉强的感觉。

可能放轻松的唱，不用那么多的技巧，可能效果会比较好。

我只是觉得啦！可能问专业人士会比较正确。。。

不过这首歌很好听，我很喜欢，我想大家都会喜欢的。

加油咯！

蛮好听的,听了有很舒服的感觉...
但你唱起来好像很辛苦很吃力的样子...
但很容易琅琅上口...不错不错!!!
加油!!!

wo jue de you dian qi guai...
gan jue shang yi ting jiu jue de shi ben di ge shou de chuang zuo.
yin wei ni de ju zi hen jian dian....
ru guo ni de yong ci neng rang ren gan jue you dian te bie he
you yi zhong hen nan jie shi de xin qing na jiu gen hao...
wo ye bu dong gai zen me shuo....yin wei mei kan guo ni de ge ci..
xi wang ni ming bai wo de yi shi...
bu yao wu hui ooh..hen bao qian zhe yang gen ni shuo...

谢谢你们的comments。嘻嘻。 其实，唱这一首歌的时
候我是刚起床的。所以有辛苦的感觉。多多抱歉。

Regarding the Superman song. I've tried writing it.
It's just that I don't think I have found a perfect
melody for it. So it doesn't mean someone else's
announced of composing that song first meant
anything :) We're all trying to make good music for
everyone. Hehe. Plus, there's also a song entitled
Superman by Five For Fighting sometime ago :) I'll
work harder on writing one in time to come :) Hope
you understand ya :)

我在改一些不好的地方。谢谢！Improvements come
when there are comments!

觉得demo永远都是最真，最好听和真情流露的。赞！赞！赞！eric!

我比较喜欢听抒情歌,所以还蛮感动的!!
CHORUS PART比较能朗朗上口...
给你鼓励..给你掌声..
继续加油!!!

PC的喇叭坏了...
听不到啊...
等我多几天啊...
我要去买了...
不要酱快换掉啊....
我要听.....

hmmm.. i've just seen something just now..
so.. not really into the mood..
will leave you a comment about the song sometime later..
plus.. i can't listen to it that clearly with my fren's comp..
hehe..
not that suitable for comments.. so wait la..
hehe..

前面部分没有有吉它声音感觉真的很好，
不过假音，会不会太过火了呢？？
嘻嘻！！过火是，太多段都是用假音，
嗯，就是最后那边的，唱得太激动那边，
哈，我不会音乐，也不敢说太多，等下怕给别人说知少少扮代表！
其实真的很开心在这里网络看到你的blog也能听到你的demo，
谢谢你！
加油！！

eric . i cant hear any song nehx ,
you ady take it out izit ?

well .. hmm ~
as long as you do your best ,,
compose a song with all your heart .
and that's a good song . ^^v


=))
shan

嗯，还好，加油努力吧。嘻嘻ING

hmm...dunno y i cant hear tat song leh...can u tell me how to hear it?